Writing II
Name : Indah Lestari
SRN : 1401120986
Name : Indah Lestari
SRN : 1401120986
Step 1 : Brainstorming using Questioning
1.
What is Tempoyak ?
2.
How familiar of Tempoyak
for people in Palangka Raya ?
3.
Write definition in your
own words for Tempoyak ?
4.
Why do you think Tempoyak
is so popular ?
Step
2 : Outline
1. Topic sentence : Tempoyak is one of the popular foods in Palangka
Raya.
2. Supporting Details :
·
Tempoyak is a unique side dish made
exclusively out of durian.
·
Tempoyak usually consumed by the
ethnic Dayakness in Palangka Raya.
·
Tempoyak is made by taking the flesh of durian and mixed
with salt and kept in room temperature.
3. Concluding Sentences :
As a popular foods in Palangka
Raya and fermented food, tempoyak making process involves a number producing
microorganisme or bacteria.
FIRST DRAFT
What Is Tempoyak ?
Tempoyak is one of the popular foods in Palangka Raya. Tempoyak
is a unique side dish made exclusively out of durian. It is usually consumed
by the ethnic Dayakness in Palangka Raya. Tempoyak is made by taking the flesh
of durian and mixed with salt and kept in room temperature. Don’t forget to
left for fermentation process for some days maybe once week. There are so many recipes to cook Tempoyak, but I
will present this recipe only. Basic Materials Tempoyak are durian, some salt, sugar and cooking oil. How to
Make Tempoyak ? Firstly, we meat durian, input into the jar while season with
enough salt. Secondly, blended ingredients are cloves of garlic, cloves onion, large pieces of red chilli, cayenne pepper, according to your
taste. The last step, stir until it cooked and then closed tightly about one week, open and mixed well.
Tempoyak ready to serve. As a popular foods in Palangka Raya and fermented food, tempoyak
making process involves a number producing microorganisme or bacteria.
Tempoyak : A food is made by taking the flesh of durian / a unique side
dish made exclusively out of durian.
Bacteria : Bakteri
Dayakness : Culture, one of the tribles in Central
Kalimantan.
Fermentation : Fermentasi, peragian.
Involve : Melibatkan, memerlukan,
mengakibatkan, mengakibatkan.
Tempoyak
: A unique side dish made
exclusively out of durian.
Its good. It so difficult to find the erro sentence ndut
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good but the last step, you can change like this finally
BalasHapusAt the fist sentence, you used complex sentence but how could it perfect if you use it without any conjuction between it or use wich, that, etc
BalasHapus