Rabu, 23 Desember 2015


Writing II
Name  : Indah Lestari
SRN    : 1401120986



Step 1         : Brainstorming using Questioning
1.     What is Tempoyak ?
2.     How familiar of Tempoyak for people in Palangka Raya ?
3.     Write definition in your own words for Tempoyak ?
4.     Why do you think Tempoyak is so popular ?
Step 2         : Outline
1.  Topic sentence     : Tempoyak is one of the popular foods in Palangka    Raya.
2.  Supporting Details        :
·     Tempoyak is a unique side dish made exclusively out of durian.
·     Tempoyak usually  consumed by the ethnic Dayakness in Palangka Raya.
·     Tempoyak is made by taking the flesh of durian and mixed with salt and kept in room temperature.
3.  Concluding Sentences :
As a popular foods in Palangka Raya and fermented food, tempoyak making process involves a number producing microorganisme or bacteria.

FIRST DRAFT
What Is Tempoyak ?


Tempoyak is one of the popular foods in Palangka Raya. Tempoyak is a unique side dish made exclusively out of durian. It is usually  consumed by the ethnic Dayakness in Palangka Raya. Tempoyak is made by taking the flesh of durian and mixed with salt and kept in room temperature. Don’t forget to left for fermentation process for some days maybe once week. There are so many recipes to cook Tempoyak, but I will present this recipe only. Basic Materials Tempoyak are durian, some salt, sugar and cooking oil. How to Make Tempoyak ? Firstly, we meat durian, input into the jar while season with enough salt. Secondly, blended ingredients are cloves of garlic, cloves onion, large pieces of red chilli, cayenne pepper, according to your taste. The last step, stir until it cooked and then closed tightly about one week, open and mixed well. Tempoyak ready to serve. As a popular foods in Palangka Raya and fermented food, tempoyak making process involves a number producing microorganisme or bacteria.


Tempoyak       : A food is made by taking the flesh of durian / a unique side dish made exclusively out of durian.
Bacteria           : Bakteri
Dayakness       : Culture, one of the tribles in Central Kalimantan.
Fermentation   : Fermentasi, peragian.
Involve            : Melibatkan, memerlukan, mengakibatkan, mengakibatkan.
Tempoyak       : A unique side dish made exclusively out of durian.

3 komentar:

  1. Its good. It so difficult to find the erro sentence ndut

    BalasHapus
  2. i think your paragraph is good but the last step, you can change like this finally

    BalasHapus
  3. At the fist sentence, you used complex sentence but how could it perfect if you use it without any conjuction between it or use wich, that, etc

    BalasHapus