NAME : INDAH LESTARI
SUBJECT : WRITING II
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Tanjung
Putting National Park
Tanjung Puting National Park is one of the best place to visit and destinations in
the Central Kalimantan. Usually the people called a park, but unlike
any park that another people seen in their city. Tanjung Puting National Park
is a jungle. Home to the incredible animals like Proboscis monkeys and Orang
Utans. The male Proboscis Monkeys are special animals because they have enermous
snout. When the tourists want to see Orang Utans or Proboscis Monkeys their
should go to Camp Leakey. It is a rehabilitation place for Orang Utans and
Proboscis.For to reach the place tourists should take a boat down Sekonyer
river. What do you think about boats guys? The people called boat is perahu
klotok which is a boathouse . If the tourist want to looking for some
informations about the place, so they can pays a tourist guide. The tourist likes to visit in Tanjung Puting National
Park because they got more knowledge about history of Orang Utans and nice
vacation exactly is the best place to visit.
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Concluding Sentence : Yellow
Ok Guys ! I think that all and please
give your comments in my paragraph.
Thank’s a lot all !!!!!
Excuse me Indah I would like to comment in your paragraph writing. In the first sentence, word of place incorrect. So you should add S in back of word for named of place you must attention about using Capital Alfabet.
BalasHapusOkey indah if you want use FREQUENCY ADVERBS in your paragraph you can use simple present, in the second sentence you write " Usually the people called a park" i think is incorrect, may be like this "Usually the pepole call a park".
BalasHapus